IELTS Writing Practice
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Content
The essay covers most development aspects but some details and comparisons could be clearer.
Structure
Paragraphs are organized logically but transitions between ideas could be improved with more linking devices.
Language
Good use of topic-specific vocabulary, though some repetition weakens lexical variety.
Grammar
Issues with plural forms and article use reduce grammatical accuracy and clarity.
Structure Guide
How to structure your essay for a Band 9 score
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, a solid structure is key. A great argument essay structure typically consists of four paragraphs with specific sentence counts.
1Introduction
- Background statement
- Detailed background
- Thesis
- Outline sentence
2Supporting Paragraphs
- Topic sentence
- Example
- Discussion
- Conclusion
Overall Band Score
0.0
251words
3paragraphs
minimum 250 words required
251
Word count
aim for 7+
1
Linking words used
minimize errors
2
Grammar errors
reduce repetition
2
Repetitive words/phrases
Coherence & Cohesion
6.0Logical structure
Clear paragraphing
Accurate linking words
Cohesive devices
Lexical Resource
6.0Varied vocabulary
Appropriate word choice
Spelling accuracy
Collocation
Grammatical Range
5.5Sentence variety
Complex structures
Clear and correct grammar
Punctuation
Task Achievement
6.5Complete response
Clear position
Supporting ideas
Development of ideas