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Some people think children should start school at a very early age. Others believe they should wait until they are older. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say kids need to go school very early because they will learn more things fast. They think if the children start young they get smart and know many subject before other kids. Also parents want send them early because parents are busy and don’t have time so school is good place to put children. But other people think children should wait because they are too small and they cry a lot. If they go school too early they get stress and don’t enjoy life. Also young children cannot focus long time so they not learn much anyway. They need more time with family at home. In my opinion I think kids should start school not too early or late. Maybe middle is best because then they are ready but not too old. If start early maybe good sometimes but not always. So it depend on the child and the parent. Overall I think both side has reason. But we need think what is better for most children but also every family is different so no one answer for everybody.

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