IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

In my opinion, I think university should teach students about jobs because this is very important for their future. When students finish university, they need to find work and earn money, so university must prepare them for this. Nowadays, many students cannot find jobs after graduation because they don't have the right skills. Companies want people who can work immediately, not people who only know theory. For example, my cousin studied philosophy and now he cannot find any job. This shows that universities should focus on practical skills. However, some people say that university should teach knowledge for knowledge. They think students should learn about many subjects like history and art. But I disagree because these subjects don't help you get a job easily. In conclusion, I believe universities main function is to prepare students for workplace. This is more useful than learning things that are not practical. Students need jobs to survive in modern world.

Some people say kids need to go school very early because they will learn more things fast. They think if the children start young they get smart and know many subject before other kids. Also parents want send them early because parents are busy and don’t have time so school is good place to put children. But other people think children should wait because they are too small and they cry a lot. If they go school too early they get stress and don’t enjoy life. Also young children cannot focus long time so they not learn much anyway. They need more time with family at home. In my opinion I think kids should start school not too early or late. Maybe middle is best because then they are ready but not too old. If start early maybe good sometimes but not always. So it depend on the child and the parent. Overall I think both side has reason. But we need think what is better for most children but also every family is different so no one answer for everybody.